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Wonderful fantasy..hope it comes true..best, Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 18, 2007 at 11:42 AM
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Very romantic. Fitting last question.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 18, 2007 at 5:29 AM
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Wow!
That was amazing!
posted by
Dark_Heart
on December 17, 2007 at 8:39 PM
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that's amazing....the end was great!!
posted by
banzonvilla
on December 17, 2007 at 5:59 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 17, 2007 at 5:53 PM
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at first I wish iy u were asking me, in the middle I got jelous on her, at
the end I cry with you........ You took my heart with your writing, u are a great writer....
If it is real life, I wish you the best.... You don't need a fire place and extra vaganzas to be in love..... If you truly love some one, marry her...don't waste your life, money comes as you work hard together......
posted by
star4sky5
on December 17, 2007 at 5:01 PM
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YOU GOT ME AT THE END>>>GREAT SET UP>>>>SAM
posted by
sam444
on December 17, 2007 at 4:23 PM
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T.L Poet
Great post. I liked the twist. Well wrote. Take care.
Bless
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on December 17, 2007 at 2:50 PM
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