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Wonderful well-knit poem--(though i wonder about title)
Especially liked the sensate approach thru time, and the seamless rhythhm of a moment that contains 3 parts: "toes meeting cold water" (hey, this is not a lake; this is the ocean)/ the dramatic turn in lines 10-14 (beneath fabric....with me in starlight)/ and then the final turn (and prehaps the "dive") that in a moment of rapture, we are participating in all things. Wonderful read (but you might want to re-look the title).
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jfm32
on December 24, 2007 at 3:31 PM
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star4sky5
on December 13, 2007 at 5:51 PM
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afzal50
on December 13, 2007 at 5:16 PM
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Nice !
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ash_pradhan
on December 13, 2007 at 3:06 PM
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excellent efffort>>>>>>>>sam
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sam444
on December 13, 2007 at 2:00 PM
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CPT
WOW, this was eerily beautiful. Very powerful.
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SEEDLINGS
on December 13, 2007 at 1:54 PM
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