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that scared the hell out of me!! But is was good writing. A whole lot to think of.
posted by
minik
on December 10, 2007 at 8:30 PM
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deep!
posted by
Amanda__
on December 10, 2007 at 6:18 PM
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WOw- What a dismal feeling this leaves one with!
You have a way of building pictures with your words and therefore, a good poem! Well done!
Cee
posted by
LadyCeeMarie
on December 10, 2007 at 2:55 PM
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I now know what your religious beliefs are.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 10, 2007 at 12:14 PM
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Life does feel that way, doesn't it?
posted by
lindo
on December 10, 2007 at 11:53 AM
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Great poem
posted by
Dee2206
on December 10, 2007 at 11:43 AM
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Soulofapoet
Well written,
posted by
Soulofapoet
on December 10, 2007 at 11:19 AM
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i agree w/ SAUL-effective "void" message of life! Vedas see cyccles 2
Yes, ultimately we burn, if not physically, then in LOSING this ego, this body-basedd, material identity. Bravo! shalom
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on December 10, 2007 at 11:12 AM
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Excellent poem, Kayzzaman. Intriguing but sad...
posted by
saul_relative
on December 10, 2007 at 10:51 AM
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KAY
Ouch, ewwww, perhaps this is true, but I don't want it to.
posted by
SEEDLINGS
on December 10, 2007 at 9:22 AM
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wonderful>>>>>>>>sam
posted by
sam444
on December 10, 2007 at 7:11 AM
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thank you!
posted by
contagion_publishing
on December 10, 2007 at 6:47 AM
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Great piece
thank you
posted by
mariaki
on December 10, 2007 at 6:01 AM
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Very good. Harpo47
posted by
Harpo47
on December 10, 2007 at 5:59 AM
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Webs of Life
Very good poem!
posted by
Oosthuizen
on December 10, 2007 at 4:41 AM
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