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thanks for reading, may you have a great holiday season!!
posted by
contagion_publishing
on December 20, 2007 at 12:07 PM
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thank you!
posted by
contagion_publishing
on December 10, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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I think you have summed it up well. As I undestad it, you are still a teenager. Teenagers are explorers. They are never satisfied; never quite sure. Teenagers make a lot of mistakes. They misconstrue a lot. But such is the nature of maturing. At least, you did not physically hurt anyone.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 8, 2007 at 5:18 AM
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essay for ewnglish
a little comglomerated for me, but if i get your jist: you are writing in order to undertand this possibility in yourself (and it's no one else's), and then you seem to deny (and negatively affirm) something on two levels --the necessity of becoming, and your regret that a relationship has changed--which was a little surprising for me because you seem to abdicate the very act of writing, while you are also doing it.
On the other hand, I find it completley intriging. It's the first time I ever saw a writer retreating from her form, and abdicating everything
(including writing) to a prior experience.
I'm quite serious about this. You might have an approach to writing no one has quite thought about before.
posted by
jfm32
on December 7, 2007 at 7:49 PM
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EXCELLENT POST>>>>KEEP WRITING>>>>>>>>SAM
posted by
sam444
on December 7, 2007 at 6:07 PM
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.....
Wise for your age but find strength in everything because the "roadblocks" as you call them get bigger and bigger.
posted by
2ndChanceAllStar
on December 7, 2007 at 5:28 PM
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