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posted by
EX_TURPI
on December 6, 2007 at 7:47 AM
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Nice, Berryjen...
posted by
saul_relative
on December 5, 2007 at 9:16 PM
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Innocence lost
I'm carried thru a difficult subject while I'm receiving the experience/feeling, and I'm brought into the experience thru well-constructed mood and timing of that experience as if I were the subject, myself--and I know because I've been there. Not exactly what I want to remember, but thanks for reminding me I have a past. Now what do I do? I think this is a wonderful word painting of something universal, and it's here I'll refect on its meaning for me...very real and haunting.
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jfm32
on December 5, 2007 at 7:37 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 5, 2007 at 5:33 PM
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Nice, Jen..welcome to blogit..you made a good decision - Ash
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 5, 2007 at 5:31 PM
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posted by
spinner
on December 5, 2007 at 4:48 PM
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