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Re: cooooool.........coooooool, you should have drove with her
There was a time, 7stars . . . there was a time when . . .
joab
posted by
joab1
on December 13, 2007 at 4:30 PM
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cooooool.........coooooool, you should have drove with her
posted by
star4sky5
on December 5, 2007 at 4:50 PM
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Re:
CATCH THE INFECTION!!!
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 5:38 PM
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KEEP WRITING!!! THANKS FOR READING
CATCH THE INFECTION!!!
posted by
contagion_publishing
on December 4, 2007 at 5:04 PM
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Re: THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Hello and Thanks. Sometimes they work, and then again, sometimes they don't . . .I'm sure you know the feeling. joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 3:32 PM
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Re: THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Thanks, spinner. Those moments seemed distant only an instant in the mind.joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 3:28 PM
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thanks for your comments. the girl next door very good very different
posted by
spinner
on December 4, 2007 at 2:35 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on December 4, 2007 at 2:25 PM
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Re: Effective prose-poem!Why does "ment" not follow "Acknowledge"-last stanza?
You caught a typo that I missed. I shall correct it immediately. Thanks for your perception. I did one edit, but hurried through it. Again, laydi daydi . . . many thanks.
joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 1:45 PM
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Effective prose-poem!Why does "ment" not follow "Acknowledge"-last stanza?
Your poem reminded me of all the rustic beauty and cultural association we (but especially I) make about the girl next door...in this piece, she is no virgin, or has had a relationship with the opposite sex. See...how much I assume or absorb in prejudice from culture, LOL
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on December 4, 2007 at 1:35 PM
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Re: Touching, Joab !
Such was the moment. Thank you. joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 12:49 PM
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Touching, Joab !
posted by
ash_pradhan
on December 4, 2007 at 10:05 AM
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Re: THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
sorry>>>kind of an eerie loss>>>>>>>sam
Harmonics stir the soul. joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 9:36 AM
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sorry>>>kind of an eerie loss>>>>>>>sam
posted by
sam444
on December 4, 2007 at 8:34 AM
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Re: Nice reading, Joab
Kayzzaman . . . sure miss my neighbor, though.
joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 8:25 AM
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Re: you should be a screen play writer
Thank you ladyc. I have written screenplays, but find poetry more enjoyable. You are kind.
joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 8:24 AM
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Nice reading, Joab
posted by
Kayzzaman
on December 4, 2007 at 8:20 AM
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you should be a screen play writer
i could visually see of all your words - very nice
posted by
ladychardonnay
on December 4, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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Re: THE GIRL NEXT DOOR
Afzal ... thank you, my friend.joab
posted by
joab1
on December 4, 2007 at 8:10 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on December 4, 2007 at 8:05 AM
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