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Wow!  What a great poem.  Such vivid imagery.    What about a companion night poem?

posted by mama_joy on December 3, 2007 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful Poem

posted by KaBooM62 on December 2, 2007 at 3:46 PM | link to this | reply

cool

posted by star4sky5 on December 2, 2007 at 3:30 PM | link to this | reply

Beautiful piece and profound; we see the sun set and the moon rise but
all of nature puts the day away as well. I would like to see the sequel to this of the coming dawn; an awakening and arising of nature directly following the ebbing into night. ~Blessings~

posted by roadscross on December 2, 2007 at 1:51 PM | link to this | reply

awsome, i loved it.

posted by callista22001 on December 2, 2007 at 11:27 AM | link to this | reply

posted by lovelyladymonk on December 2, 2007 at 11:13 AM | link to this | reply

lovely!

posted by Amanda__ on December 2, 2007 at 10:34 AM | link to this | reply

what a nice poem!

posted by shelly_b on December 2, 2007 at 10:33 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful

posted by nemonemo on December 2, 2007 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

Beautiful

posted by nemonemo on December 2, 2007 at 9:50 AM | link to this | reply

hmmmmm
great job..... have a good day... keep smiling..

posted by whiteknight3128 on December 2, 2007 at 7:08 AM | link to this | reply

Days and Nights : A short poem
Another well written poem. Well done. I enjoyed this one very much. Keep it up!

posted by Oosthuizen on December 2, 2007 at 6:57 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzza, beautiful arrangement of words, and beautifully done

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 2, 2007 at 6:01 AM | link to this | reply

wonderful and poignant!!!! sam

posted by sam444 on December 2, 2007 at 4:47 AM | link to this | reply