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With our souls together:a short poem (was the one that onfused my pea brain

--yet I appreciated the poetry. If u ever feel the winter, think Clearwater, FL.

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posted by ILLUMINATI8 on December 2, 2007 at 10:11 AM | link to this | reply

cooooool

posted by star4sky5 on December 1, 2007 at 6:04 PM | link to this | reply

Kayzz

Word for word was written with so much meaning.  Take Care.

Bless

posted by UncharteredSoul on December 1, 2007 at 3:17 PM | link to this | reply

i agree w/ last comment; awesome.I felt i saw the red sky myself!
well-written; i did not follow the poetic language and grammar in yr previous poem so i did not comment, only because i meant to ask for clarity.Bravo today; really well put together.

posted by ILLUMINATI8 on December 1, 2007 at 1:17 PM | link to this | reply

Inspiring

posted by Ann_Onimous on December 1, 2007 at 1:11 PM | link to this | reply

very nice
if this were a live reading I would give it two snaps and a thumbs up.

posted by joanna360 on December 1, 2007 at 10:38 AM | link to this | reply

Nice !

posted by ash_pradhan on December 1, 2007 at 10:25 AM | link to this | reply

kayz
excellent

posted by richinstore on December 1, 2007 at 8:07 AM | link to this | reply

well done.............sam

posted by sam444 on December 1, 2007 at 8:04 AM | link to this | reply

hmmmm
nice..... have a good day... thanks for sharing.....

posted by whiteknight3128 on December 1, 2007 at 6:26 AM | link to this | reply

Kayzzaman
I find your poems deeply well-introspected and profound. Well done, my friend.

posted by Bhaskar.ing on December 1, 2007 at 5:58 AM | link to this | reply

Excellent poem and imagery!

posted by Ariala on December 1, 2007 at 4:38 AM | link to this | reply