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all your writing has great descriptions and, if put into the form of stanzas and cantos, could read a lot like The Divine Comedy. You have a lot of potential as a writer. Your topic, however, is a little misplaced. Don't get me wrong. I'm not judging your subjects. To each his own, you know? But I noticed you dont get a lot of comments. You might have a better prospect for more feedback in sites specifically for these darker topics.

your stories are well written, and carry themselves a lot like an epic with a modern undertone. Its quite unique. Try not to screw up the art you have started to create by attempting to overdo it. you have the perfect amount of all the right ingredients. dont upset the balance by changing the style.

posted by draco101 on December 3, 2007 at 2:20 AM | link to this | reply