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I could imagine a belly dancer while reading this!!!!
posted by
Offy
on November 27, 2007 at 10:00 PM
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Lovely, I'll look forward to more.
posted by
BrightIrish
on November 27, 2007 at 9:00 PM
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posted by
afzal50
on November 27, 2007 at 6:20 PM
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This is delightful..& mesmerising.Unless Im not connecting dots, too many
competing images or metaphors. But powerful and enjoyable if one just appreciates others' message. Shalom & good luck with the assignments. Or should I wish U GOD LUCK!
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 27, 2007 at 4:40 PM
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oooh bellydancing!
posted by
mysteria
on November 27, 2007 at 4:37 PM
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posted by
Soul_Builder101
on November 27, 2007 at 3:11 PM
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NICE SUBMISSION.. STUDIES FIRST, WE WILL BE PATIENT!!!!! SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 27, 2007 at 11:50 AM
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this is just gorgeous.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 27, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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"blue feathers drenched in morning dew drops" - you create such vivid images!
posted by
Troosha
on November 27, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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