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well written, great poem,
i have one of these people in my life.
posted by
callista22001
on November 28, 2007 at 10:45 AM
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The story I didn't say it. Ihave made a story in my mind, but Kar my
baby son want to make a script, he writes and writes all the time, then he imagine these characters...........So I was trying to tell him a story, which he can develop as a script, so he can write and give to some one I know: S KNOX, she knows my sons.........a friend of mine for a while.
By the way, NICKELBACH song doesn't have anything to do with the story........
The song has my favorite line: if every body cares, no body cry........it's a cool song.
Also listen to train: Callin all angels, a cool one too....
By the way, thanks for visiting.......
Star/7.......
posted by
star4sky5
on November 27, 2007 at 4:41 PM
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Ohhhh.... Pat... no no no, everything is an illusion, why not enjoy it while it lasts?
posted by
nemonemo
on November 27, 2007 at 10:10 AM
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patmanplus
posted by
richinstore
on November 27, 2007 at 7:02 AM
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Beautiful ! WEll said !
posted by
afzal50
on November 26, 2007 at 10:14 PM
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THAT WAS SHOCKINGLY WONDERFUL. FUN READ!!!! SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 26, 2007 at 7:19 PM
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lol
i love it!
honestly i thing "is what is" should be "is what's" because its a tongue twister the other way, and caused me to double-take the sentence...
but I love it!
posted by
JustJilly
on November 26, 2007 at 5:06 PM
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