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beautiful...I love it.
posted by
richinstore
on November 26, 2007 at 5:49 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on November 25, 2007 at 4:56 PM
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I ENJOYED READING YOUR THOUGHTS. SAM
posted by
sam444
on November 25, 2007 at 3:49 PM
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work on the flow of your words
the concepts are good, the flow is a little confusing but holds potential, you need to feel your words in order for your reader to feel it, otherwise you are doing good, the more you write and read others to see what you like and dont like the better your words will reach out and grab the attention and hold. good luck ~ peg
posted by
1pegesus4u
on November 25, 2007 at 3:05 PM
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Knowledge
Great work, and oh how so true, thanks for sharing your heart with the world.
posted by
angelink
on November 25, 2007 at 1:04 PM
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http://farm1.static.flickr.com/18/70005623_986cd33b0a.jpg?v=0
A, flow like a brand new river, and fishes will spawn with thee
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on November 25, 2007 at 11:59 AM
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Very nice!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on November 25, 2007 at 11:51 AM
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