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posted by
afzal50
on November 24, 2007 at 5:37 PM
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wonderful 1st stanza
the universe spiraling out, and that corridor being another man's heaven. While the theme is well-built (constructed), perhaps necessarily, I'm left wondering about the possibility of this theme thru its middle, and was happy to find the theme revisited in your last line, and just a little reversed. For after all, I am the perceiving viewer.
posted by
jfm32
on November 24, 2007 at 2:56 PM
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sounds like something of startreck / spinner
posted by
spinner
on November 24, 2007 at 2:30 PM
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beautiful
posted by
star4sky5
on November 24, 2007 at 1:40 PM
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