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Re: mama_joy-thank you.I feel you have the same Spirit as I do. Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 20, 2007 at 8:25 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you so much dream>Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 20, 2007 at 8:23 AM | link to this | reply

Lovely!  Listen, bend closer, you can almost hear their gossip

 

posted by mama_joy on November 20, 2007 at 3:51 AM | link to this | reply

Ohhhhhh...... murmuring whispers....

posted by nemonemo on November 20, 2007 at 3:37 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris, I can actually hear those branches and bushes...
Hi Rumored-so can I-when the trains along the side of our place 'sleep' for the night! Many thanks.Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:58 PM | link to this | reply

Chris, I can actually hear those branches and bushes...
.....

posted by Rumor on November 19, 2007 at 1:56 PM | link to this | reply

Re: As FYS said...
Hi Troosha-yes-you are right-it does! Thank you.Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:39 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Thank you afzal! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:37 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello sam--that's lovely of you-thank you! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: I love the word "chattering"--- this is one of your best.
Thank you very much FineYoungSinger! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:36 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Hello spinner--you do have a point there--it's like 'kids' in a silent
dormitory. Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:35 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble
Thank you richinstore! Chris.

posted by Scramble on November 19, 2007 at 1:33 PM | link to this | reply

As FYS said...
good use of the word "chatter".  It some how gave it depth. 

posted by Troosha on November 19, 2007 at 1:21 PM | link to this | reply

posted by afzal50 on November 19, 2007 at 10:19 AM | link to this | reply

EXCELLENT!!! SAM

posted by sam444 on November 19, 2007 at 7:10 AM | link to this | reply

I love the word "chattering"--- this is one of your best.

posted by FineYoungSinger on November 19, 2007 at 6:49 AM | link to this | reply

if they are cahtering then it can't be silient haha good job / spinner

posted by spinner on November 19, 2007 at 6:41 AM | link to this | reply

scramble

posted by richinstore on November 19, 2007 at 5:36 AM | link to this | reply