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                    Light in the Dark
                
                This is heavy, very heavy stuff for anyone 16 years old. Have fun, there will certainly be more loves, just as magical that have no abuse attached.
 
                
                    posted by
                    Justi
                     on November 10, 2007 at 7:52 AM
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                    Good poetics
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Kayzzaman
                     on November 8, 2007 at 9:36 PM
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                    Beautiful and sad....
                
                Is this personal experience?You should be enjoying life,not take it so serious. 


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                    posted by
                    donelle
                     on November 8, 2007 at 9:01 PM
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                    Poignant and profound !
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    afzal50
                     on November 8, 2007 at 8:16 PM
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