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I enjoyed the story very much. It flowed rather nicely, good plot,
good illustrations of characters and imagery of circumstance. Suggestion: use Word if you have it first for spell check, or the simple spell check here. It appears your imagination is on a streak faster than your hands can type (good thing) because you've reversed your letters in many words. Please don't consider this as negative but rather positive critique. I would appreciate more critique in my writing. Everyone is very nice here (good thing) but I'm looking for bare bones critiques. I hope you feel the same.
Overall content is interesting and intriguing; I drew a profound conclusion (that's me), Julia's mind unable to accept the death of her child (I assume), brought her full circle in finding a way of letting go. Psychological thriller! Good work! 
posted by
roadscross
on January 2, 2008 at 9:36 PM
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Good story
posted by
Kayzzaman
on November 8, 2007 at 3:52 AM
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vogue
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posted by
richinstore
on November 8, 2007 at 2:29 AM
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