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Beautiful. I like it.
posted by
RobertMadang
on November 6, 2007 at 8:25 AM
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Draco,
I highly doubt you're retarded when it comes to anything...maybe you just need a bit of practice. If you have feelings and thoughts you can write poetry! keep a positive attitude...it'll get you places!
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on November 6, 2007 at 4:23 AM
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i wish i could give a decent comment, but im retarded when it comes to poetry. sorry. keep up the poetry, though. its a skill you should cherish, because few have it.
posted by
draco101
on November 6, 2007 at 2:21 AM
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A beautiful poem and the emotion came through clearly.
posted by
BrightIrish
on November 5, 2007 at 3:57 PM
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lovely
posted by
flappergirl
on November 5, 2007 at 12:26 PM
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I particularly liked the last stanza of your poem
posted by
Straightforward
on November 5, 2007 at 11:49 AM
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Kayzz
So thought provoking...beautiful
posted by
Jokester
on November 5, 2007 at 9:12 AM
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Kayzz,
WOW. There is a lot of emotion in that! Well expressed!
posted by
Sincerity_Anna
on November 5, 2007 at 8:50 AM
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beautiful thanks / spinner
posted by
spinner
on November 5, 2007 at 8:28 AM
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Kayzz
I loved your closing line - I loved the entire poem. It's wonderful work!
posted by
Troosha
on November 5, 2007 at 8:22 AM
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kayz
posted by
richinstore
on November 5, 2007 at 7:36 AM
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"Hold your sun and the storms will be away"
This is a great line. Nice work, Kayzzaman
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on November 5, 2007 at 6:56 AM
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Well said ! It's beautiful .
posted by
afzal50
on November 5, 2007 at 4:59 AM
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Beautiful work!
posted by
Ariala
on November 5, 2007 at 4:50 AM
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