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posted by
Kayzzaman
on November 3, 2007 at 10:08 AM
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this is very strong - i like it - i can feel it - it has physical tension
- it makes me hold my breath - and that's a rush - snakes are good swimmers too - it's nice switching between both roles - crushing and being crushed - time is only hugging you a bit too tightly, it doesn't know its own strength - perhaps it loves you too much
posted by
chrisja
on November 3, 2007 at 9:38 AM
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flappergirl
how fearful!
posted by
richinstore
on November 3, 2007 at 8:32 AM
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mmhmmm
but don't stop the fight.... it can't hold on forever.... Have a good day
posted by
whiteknight3128
on November 3, 2007 at 8:10 AM
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