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for being brave an courageous..
I enjoyed your poem
posted by
nemonemo
on October 31, 2007 at 3:01 PM
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IC great poem
resisting shows strength of character well done; thanks for sharing
posted by
mariaki
on October 30, 2007 at 3:46 AM
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A poem of hope.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 30, 2007 at 2:47 AM
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:)
Thanks for sharing.
posted by
Brian76
on October 29, 2007 at 5:13 PM
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Wonderful poem!
As I read it I wondered if you could take poet licence and get rid of the word 'be' before 'beholden'....you then get the meaning of the phrase 'to be beholden' but the rhythm is neat and the meaning feel more layered and laiden with possibility. Just a thought....
posted by
Celeste632
on October 29, 2007 at 4:54 PM
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good poem, easy to relate to.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 29, 2007 at 1:17 PM
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good work we are all tempted by the flesh / spinner
posted by
spinner
on October 29, 2007 at 1:02 PM
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Touching work, easy to identify with - well done.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 29, 2007 at 12:48 PM
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Re: Icpoetrynu, don't be too hard on yourself. Everybody's human
Thank you for the support. I appreciate it. I guess you get to an age you feel you should know better - but I guess temptation has no gender, age or discrerempcies.
posted by
icpoetrynu
on October 29, 2007 at 12:43 PM
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Icpoetrynu, don't be too hard on yourself. Everybody's human
I've walked the line of temptation of things, but to be tempted is not to give in. I just try not to keep temptation around me.
Beautiful poem.
posted by
Zena77
on October 29, 2007 at 12:37 PM
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