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Thank you for reading.
posted by
jtoro07
on November 29, 2007 at 5:19 PM
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Thank you.
posted by
jtoro07
on November 8, 2007 at 6:20 AM
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posted by
star4sky5
on October 30, 2007 at 10:09 AM
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Re: a gentle retort
Yes, challenge indeed. It's written toward the recent loss of my son and yes, the writing of it, becomes that much more complicated, but words on paper, often deter unwanted actions or unpleasant actions so one attempts to let out the feelings, as opposed to bottling them up and making them more harmful. However yes, mental clutter does need cleaning up, if one is to proceed.
posted by
jtoro07
on October 30, 2007 at 9:57 AM
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Re: but it wouldn't be fun if it wasn't complex, right?
I agree, appreciations for it (life), would be that much less.
posted by
jtoro07
on October 30, 2007 at 9:53 AM
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Re: Beautiful
My pleasure. Yes we do, it's those times that help us define ourselves and our resolve, not to mention, our overall strength toward living.
posted by
jtoro07
on October 30, 2007 at 9:52 AM
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Re: jtoro
Thank u for enjoying. True, they're not good, but must be dealt with head on.
posted by
jtoro07
on October 30, 2007 at 9:51 AM
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but it wouldn't be fun if it wasn't complex, right?
posted by
Matie
on October 29, 2007 at 3:52 PM
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Beautiful
poem on hanging in and staying in the game. Thank you - we all feel like life's too complicated at times and feel like bailing but getting through those times does make you appreciate life more.
posted by
icpoetrynu
on October 29, 2007 at 1:03 PM
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a gentle retort
i definately feel the challenge from the voice in this poem, but i believe life will be as you view it to be, and we have to train ourselves to clean closets and clear clutter to keep things as simple as possible in and around us.
posted by
KingKai
on October 29, 2007 at 12:57 PM
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jtoro
Extremely real observations. I do not see complications as anything good. Being bogged down isn't nice. Being unfree isn't nice!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 29, 2007 at 12:41 PM
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