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Great poem, opheliablue. Where are you? What's going on?
posted by
saul_relative
on November 11, 2007 at 12:37 PM
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i told ya.....MONDAYS ARE WORTHLESS
posted by
alicemalice
on October 30, 2007 at 4:09 AM
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Opehlia,
Here's a rose for your day:
posted by
Zena77
on October 29, 2007 at 9:40 AM
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Oh, been there
HATED it... I can definitely relate. Awful feeling. Great poem.
posted by
le_divorcee
on October 29, 2007 at 8:28 AM
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Excellent....... and oh so close to home!
thank you
posted by
mariaki
on October 29, 2007 at 6:36 AM
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opheliablue
excellent one! but v sad
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posted by
White_Elephant
on October 29, 2007 at 1:06 AM
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ophelia
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 28, 2007 at 7:35 PM
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Opheliablue,
First, the critic in me wants to say, "well done" on the poetry, and then my heart aches for you just reading this. To want what you can't have, oh, I know that one, like an old sad song.
posted by
Zena77
on October 28, 2007 at 1:17 PM
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I can relate to this one.
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 28, 2007 at 1:10 PM
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Sad, opheliablue. Poignant...
posted by
saul_relative
on October 28, 2007 at 1:02 PM
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opheliablue
Your poetry is so very touching in it's simplicity and reality. I can remember relationships like that which you have described so well luv.
posted by
WileyJohn
on October 28, 2007 at 10:47 AM
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Good job, Ophelia
Your poetry is easy to read and understand. This is excellent.
posted by
MaggieMae
on October 28, 2007 at 10:38 AM
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I agree with antonionio / spinner
posted by
spinner
on October 28, 2007 at 10:34 AM
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It's simply beautiful !
posted by
afzal50
on October 28, 2007 at 6:52 AM
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Excellent - deceptively simple.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 28, 2007 at 3:52 AM
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thank you for your expression...i enjoyed it
posted by
rockiesroad
on October 28, 2007 at 3:26 AM
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Ophelia
very casual but it's lovely.
posted by
richinstore
on October 28, 2007 at 2:47 AM
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