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thx for all pos. comments-and constructive criticism
i need them

posted by Sudanym_ on October 26, 2007 at 4:05 PM | link to this | reply

No long walks for me-not lately
it just felt good to write that; it feels better if people like it. i have to write, i must, like Fine Young Singer's About This Blog quote. 

posted by Sudanym_ on October 26, 2007 at 4:04 PM | link to this | reply

patmanplus
when the flame is gone... does that mean love is 'gone', too?

posted by richinstore on October 26, 2007 at 12:43 AM | link to this | reply

PAt.... THERE  were a number of typing errors just now - it's six a.m.  MAX

posted by maxcohen on October 25, 2007 at 8:57 PM | link to this | reply

PAM, a lot of pain here, I especially like the "improv poem" - I love automatic writing.  Do you go from long walks in nature - it's fantastic, you can foget all the jim-jims back at home. Max

posted by maxcohen on October 25, 2007 at 8:56 PM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on October 25, 2007 at 8:33 PM | link to this | reply

patmanplus

posted by Soul_Builder101 on October 25, 2007 at 7:09 PM | link to this | reply

I should have done that to my ex-husband.

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 25, 2007 at 5:48 PM | link to this | reply