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thanks for sharing.
posted by
richinstore
on October 25, 2007 at 9:14 AM
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Interesting and flowing on..
with a strong twist.
posted by
Katray2
on October 25, 2007 at 5:31 AM
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Just enjoyable!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on October 25, 2007 at 1:33 AM
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Just enjoyable!
posted by
Kayzzaman
on October 25, 2007 at 1:33 AM
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That was a roller-coaster ride. Abrupt ending, though. Pulled me up.
posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 25, 2007 at 1:20 AM
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Very simple but powerful !
posted by
afzal50
on October 24, 2007 at 11:18 PM
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c'mon cheer up.....
posted by
star4sky5
on October 24, 2007 at 9:30 PM
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