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This is a very moving poem, especially because it is so near to my own thoughts.  You have a great amount of honesty and clarity in your writing and I like reading your work (something I don't write much).  It's been a busy night between our blogs.  Max

posted by maxcohen on October 24, 2007 at 1:12 PM | link to this | reply

So many questons (Crashing)
I know the feeling of being bombarded with "If's" "could" "would". I also am raw meat waiting for the hunters to hunt me down and chew me up when I show how I feel. Will you love the real me? Will the real me chase you away? Do I dare be myself. And it all spins round and round like your hydroplaining in your head waiting for the crash.

posted by icpoetrynu on October 24, 2007 at 10:51 AM | link to this | reply