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Nicely done...
posted by
saul_relative
on October 24, 2007 at 9:45 AM
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beautiful piece
posted by
White_Elephant
on October 24, 2007 at 3:47 AM
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Re: white knight
thank you... i'n glad you liked it......have a good day.....everyone....... keep smiling
posted by
whiteknight3128
on October 24, 2007 at 3:24 AM
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white knight
Wow..it's beautifully written. You're truly poetic. Could the 'moon' to be a beautiful lady passing by as you look out of the window? As a 'science' man, I'm more practical for I could only see real life people like 'farmers working the the meadow'. Thanks for sharing. I appreciate it.
posted by
richinstore
on October 23, 2007 at 11:45 PM
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WK, it's awesome.......
posted by
star4sky5
on October 23, 2007 at 10:25 PM
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Beautiful, White!
The mystique of the piece is the reader is left wondering if you are looking at an actual person or an angel of sorts.....(or maybe both
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posted by
Troosha
on October 23, 2007 at 3:07 PM
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