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Draco
ty again.  I wrote this for my daughter...she had just made the same mistake and now his name is Peanuts.

posted by Jokester on October 23, 2007 at 5:53 AM | link to this | reply

Troosha
yvw  When my daughter read it, she got up and gave me a little smack and said, "not nice."  I laughed so hard I almost cried, lol.

posted by Jokester on October 23, 2007 at 5:51 AM | link to this | reply

hahaha! that was great. you build up suspence all throughout the story like filling a balloon, and then you pop it it one brief sentence. definitely not what i was being led to think. very well written.

posted by draco101 on October 22, 2007 at 8:26 PM | link to this | reply

Jokester
Got me!   Thanks for the read.

posted by Troosha on October 22, 2007 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

MandaLee
ty!

posted by Jokester on October 22, 2007 at 2:18 PM | link to this | reply

posted by Amanda__ on October 22, 2007 at 12:53 PM | link to this | reply

richinstore
Thanks! 

posted by Jokester on October 22, 2007 at 6:28 AM | link to this | reply

White Elephant

Ah, now would moi do that?  Hmmmm......

Hey, did you ever read the last installment of "The Noise"?  Nope, I don't think so, lol.  Here......no, better make it two.........you may need it.    Nah, really...it'll be fine.....

 

posted by Jokester on October 22, 2007 at 6:27 AM | link to this | reply

Jokester
Cheers! .... *sic* er hmmm, I do believe dat was da funniest story I ever read!!! teehee hee I mean WTF was I thinking ~ your nickname is HELLO!!!!!!!! .... JOKESTER right???!!!

erm hmmm did you just put something in my drink???? OMG! I'm dead and she'll be writing about me tomorrow ~ and I won't even be able to comment!!!!!!!!! Now that sucks!


posted by White_Elephant on October 22, 2007 at 6:21 AM | link to this | reply

White Elephant
Just a cat!  Promise!  You said you wanted humor, right?  Heck, I chuckled as I wrote it.  And...you didn't want the dreaded "more tomorrow!" so I wrote the whole thing just for you!  If those drinks (see other comment, lol) didn't work, surely, this would.  And I was right...you talked to me again! 

posted by Jokester on October 22, 2007 at 6:15 AM | link to this | reply

Jokester
Phew! .... that was close!!!!!!!!! was already heading for the erm ...

Gee Wiz! Thank God it was only a cat? ... or was it ~ will this thing be continued tomorrow, or what????????????????? I NEED TO KNOW!


posted by White_Elephant on October 22, 2007 at 6:05 AM | link to this | reply

jokester
 full of suspense.

posted by richinstore on October 22, 2007 at 5:55 AM | link to this | reply