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Good One!
posted by
heartworms
on October 23, 2007 at 5:38 PM
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pelagus
Good work!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 23, 2007 at 12:59 PM
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toxic poisons
the toxins flowed like a river of poison and it burned my eyes as it freely ran down my fore head. sweating so hard barely breathing wanting you here as almost as bad as i want you dead, outside the world waits but i can not go , it is here my fate and that is all i want to know.
Hi pelagus, hope you dont mind me adding a thought a line a couple lines to your lovely poem.
i was inspired and had to write.
twomany
posted by
twomany
on October 22, 2007 at 2:06 AM
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posted by
afzal50
on October 21, 2007 at 11:07 PM
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