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gavel
the ninja warrior could have repented for his killings...hopefully by becoming a buddhist monk, he could wash away his sin.

posted by richinstore on October 16, 2007 at 7:32 AM | link to this | reply

My heart breaks...
This poem exposes the truth we all hide from the world, that inside we are all a scared child afraid to truly live. As painful as it is, the ending line is what breaks my heart, not because it is sad although it is that, but because it is so full of hope and joy. Once we break free from our fears we can begin to live, and the greatest joy is in the living.

posted by Dark_Heart on October 15, 2007 at 11:01 PM | link to this | reply

Happy writing.
Read my poems in my blog.

posted by Kayzzaman on October 15, 2007 at 10:10 PM | link to this | reply

Shalom...

posted by lovelyladymonk on October 15, 2007 at 7:10 PM | link to this | reply