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            - Go to For the next week I'll be posting two haiku poems every evening - what fun!
        
        
                
                
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                thankyou.  It's best to read a large amount of the classic Japanese haiku poems by Basho, Boncho, Issa etc. in good translation.  Many of the books have the guidelines and rules for haiku, don't bend the language to keep to the syllable format.  Max
                
                    posted by
                    maxcohen
                     on October 15, 2007 at 2:30 PM
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                    great.
                
                I am jealous.  Someone teach me to haiku.  I suck at it.
                
                    posted by
                    FineYoungSinger
                     on October 15, 2007 at 2:07 PM
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                thank you
                
                    posted by
                    maxcohen
                     on October 15, 2007 at 1:46 PM
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                    maxcohen
                
                The second is true, true, true!
                
                    posted by
                    Soul_Builder101
                     on October 15, 2007 at 1:18 PM
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                    Re: The two places have much in common then! Good work.
                
                thankyou
                
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                    maxcohen
                     on October 15, 2007 at 1:02 PM
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                thank you
                
                    posted by
                    maxcohen
                     on October 15, 2007 at 1:01 PM
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                Good stuff - I really like that second one 
 
                
                    posted by
                    opheliablue
                     on October 15, 2007 at 11:45 AM
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                    The two places have much in common then! Good work.
                
                
                
                    posted by
                    Antonionioni
                     on October 15, 2007 at 10:30 AM
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