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robert
beautiful and strong words 
posted by
drohan254
on October 14, 2007 at 11:13 PM
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Robert
posted by
richinstore
on October 14, 2007 at 9:52 PM
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Good poem. Well written from the heart.
katzs
posted by
katzs
on October 14, 2007 at 5:20 PM
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Well done and well written.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 14, 2007 at 3:56 PM
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Robert
Sad is probably what you experienced; bitter is not what I sense here. You did not lose; you did all you could.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 14, 2007 at 11:47 AM
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I thought for a minute I was not going to like it but the last few lines brought it to life exellent poem / spinner
posted by
spinner
on October 14, 2007 at 9:15 AM
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