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posted by star4sky5 on October 12, 2007 at 10:23 PM | link to this | reply

Re: So very well written and I FEEl for you! God bless-Chris.
Thank you Chris, I very much appreciate it~

posted by NightMajik on October 12, 2007 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

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Dark_Moon, thank you for your comment and your beautiful poem. I really appreciate it.

posted by NightMajik on October 12, 2007 at 10:12 PM | link to this | reply

Re: wEll expressed !
Thanks afzal!

posted by NightMajik on October 12, 2007 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: vivid.
Thank you

posted by NightMajik on October 12, 2007 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

Re: it's already there
Star - thanks.

posted by NightMajik on October 12, 2007 at 10:11 PM | link to this | reply

So very well written and I FEEl for you! God bless-Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 12, 2007 at 7:44 AM | link to this | reply

 i'm sorry...i experienced something similar....here is what i said about it at the time.....Moon

a heart doesn’t break

an ego breaks

the personality ruptures

the little i is crushed and fractured

desires defeated

dreams destroyed

wishes shattered

love is not broken

love is wounded

love grieves

love yearns for union with its source

love craves merger with its double

a heart doesn’t break

a heart is pierced

a heart doesn’t break

a heart bleeds

 

So long as the sugar is on the tongue,

you feel the sweetness in taste

Similarly, so long as the heart has love,

peace and devotion, you feel the bliss.

 

Sathya Sai Baba

 

February 13 ’07

 

posted by magic_moon on October 11, 2007 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

wEll expressed !

posted by afzal50 on October 11, 2007 at 9:06 PM | link to this | reply

vivid.

posted by FineYoungSinger on October 11, 2007 at 8:46 PM | link to this | reply

it's already there

posted by star4sky5 on October 11, 2007 at 8:41 PM | link to this | reply