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Re: Hi .Dave.--thanks for thumbs up! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 12, 2007 at 9:37 AM | link to this | reply

posted by _dave_says_ack_ on October 12, 2007 at 7:55 AM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble
richinstore-bless you for the thumbs up! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 12, 2007 at 2:32 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Last one
NightMajic--thank you so much! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 12, 2007 at 2:31 AM | link to this | reply

scramble

posted by richinstore on October 12, 2007 at 1:42 AM | link to this | reply

Last one
I love the contrast in this

posted by NightMajik on October 11, 2007 at 8:34 PM | link to this | reply

Re: scramble
Hi Lustorlove---I think possibly the 2nd one? It takes only one-------? Love Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 11, 2007 at 1:40 PM | link to this | reply

scramble
there is always one that I can relate to , can you guess which one this time?

posted by Lanetay on October 11, 2007 at 1:15 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Scramble
Troosha--it is indeed! Now I have learned to be that 'by stander'-at one time I would have got 'sucked in'-but not anymore! Thank you--Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 11, 2007 at 11:56 AM | link to this | reply

Re: opheliablue--I'm pleased you like it--thank you! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 11, 2007 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Chris
Thanks Soul Builder--I'm pleased--we need to keep our brains active! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 11, 2007 at 11:53 AM | link to this | reply

Scramble
It takes only one...   isn't that the truth?! 

posted by Troosha on October 11, 2007 at 11:12 AM | link to this | reply

Oh I like that! It's very evocative... and I love the 'change' in feeling in the second part then the third part feels quite kind of shocking.. very good

posted by opheliablue on October 11, 2007 at 10:02 AM | link to this | reply

Chris
You got me thinking again!

posted by Soul_Builder101 on October 11, 2007 at 10:00 AM | link to this | reply