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Nicely written.
posted by
RobertMadang
on October 13, 2007 at 2:15 AM
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All I can say is....wow! This is a great poem.
posted by
Contemplating_Poetry
on October 12, 2007 at 7:44 PM
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seventh heaven.........good luck buddy
posted by
star4sky5
on October 11, 2007 at 8:14 PM
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kayzz
Resounding determination in those words!
posted by
Troosha
on October 11, 2007 at 2:00 PM
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kayzzman
Declared intentions and promises are quite clear! What is her view?
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 11, 2007 at 11:29 AM
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eek!
too possessive sounding for me
but then, i have a very open relationship with my boyfriend... and... I already have his love so I guess i wouldn't relate well to having to win it...
guess im just lucky
nice prose tho
posted by
JustJilly
on October 11, 2007 at 8:38 AM
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posted by
riri0322
on October 11, 2007 at 8:33 AM
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posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 11, 2007 at 7:55 AM
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kayz
Love should be unconditional
posted by
richinstore
on October 11, 2007 at 7:03 AM
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Nice love poem !
posted by
afzal50
on October 11, 2007 at 6:56 AM
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