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The poem is good! I enjoyed it. I like the choice of wording - makes you think. I want to read more.....
posted by
icpoetrynu
on October 11, 2007 at 8:15 AM
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very nice
posted by
star4sky5
on October 10, 2007 at 9:24 PM
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kayzzaman
Pretty good writing!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 10, 2007 at 6:14 PM
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Good choice of words in this poem. Thank you for this poem. Appreciate it very much.
katzs
posted by
katzs
on October 10, 2007 at 4:47 PM
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Kayzz
Interesting.
posted by
EX_TURPI
on October 10, 2007 at 4:29 PM
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kayzz, this is great stuff, but please do tell us a bit more about you...
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posted by
Rumor
on October 10, 2007 at 2:10 PM
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Very good..
posted by
opheliablue
on October 10, 2007 at 1:26 PM
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great work here!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 10, 2007 at 12:21 PM
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KAYZZ
I felt this one, your others are of interesting reads also as I read before. Keep them coming.
Bless
Regards
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on October 10, 2007 at 11:44 AM
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Kayzzaman
You certainly have a poetic style all your own. I would like to know more about you. Any chance you might write something about yourself on your "About Me" page?
posted by
TAPS.
on October 10, 2007 at 10:56 AM
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I loved this
posted by
riri0322
on October 10, 2007 at 9:51 AM
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Kay
How wonderful and moving. I really enjoyed you use of "bowl" - it fits so perfectly. I feel a lot of heart in your work....
posted by
Troosha
on October 10, 2007 at 8:49 AM
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These poems are unusual and full of depth - well done!
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 10, 2007 at 7:59 AM
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This one stirs thought in me. Well done! ~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on October 10, 2007 at 7:12 AM
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Hello K
Good poem, full of deep thoughts..one to study.
Lou
posted by
Cameraeye
on October 10, 2007 at 7:02 AM
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kayz
posted by
richinstore
on October 10, 2007 at 6:33 AM
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Good poem !
posted by
afzal50
on October 10, 2007 at 6:20 AM
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