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It reaches far into the soul's thoughts and questions. It's so fine!
posted by
cnutz
on October 10, 2007 at 9:27 AM
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thank you for sharing. great writing
posted by
minik
on October 9, 2007 at 11:12 PM
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Kayzzaman
posted by
jacentaOld
on October 9, 2007 at 10:43 PM
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kayzzaman
This is fine poetry!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on October 9, 2007 at 8:37 AM
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WEll- written !
posted by
afzal50
on October 9, 2007 at 7:19 AM
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posted by
riri0322
on October 9, 2007 at 7:17 AM
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This is fine but the dependency sounds uncomfortable, even dangerous
posted by
Straightforward
on October 9, 2007 at 5:22 AM
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