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                    Re: Kaboo's writing
                
                Thanks for the suggestion, mine can be kinda long. I'll do that.    
                
                    posted by
                    KaBooM62
                     on October 8, 2007 at 11:38 PM
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                    Kaboo's writing
                
                You have a unique writing style, and your own use of English is quite good. I would only make one suggestion: you might consider sumitting in smaller bites. It's only a suggestion.
                
                    posted by
                    GEPRUITT
                     on October 8, 2007 at 11:14 PM
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