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FineYoungSinger
Thank you! :)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 10, 2007 at 8:09 AM
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Dark_Moon
That's something I often think about... no.. usually I don't know how it's going to end. Usually I have a first line or just a few words in my head for a few days and then they suddenly 'come out' and I write the whole poem really quickly - then I leave it for a couple of days and probably change a few words. But it's a strange feeling.. I usually don't feel as if it was me that wrote the poem.. sometimes I don't know what I meant by something until months later and I don't think I ever know how it's going to end.
How about you? :)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 10, 2007 at 8:08 AM
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This was just loaded with a dullness, in a good way, like the dull pain
of knowing that someone is toying with your emotions. Excellent work, opheliablue!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 9, 2007 at 10:45 AM
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Tell me Ophelia, do you know at the outset how it is going to 'end'? And if you do, then doesn't that mean that it has all somehow already 'happened'? And if not, then when/how do you know? Tell me for you and I'll tell you for me. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on October 8, 2007 at 9:15 PM
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Troosha
Thank you for reading it out loud for me! And I'm glad you liked it! :)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 8, 2007 at 12:08 PM
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Ophelia
I read it out loud for you and is was great! I could feel your rising awareness that something/someone was slipping away.
posted by
Troosha
on October 8, 2007 at 10:22 AM
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Re: Some great tricks with language and image -
Thank you very much :)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 8, 2007 at 9:57 AM
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Some great tricks with language and image -
it creates a suitably confused and disoriented feel.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 8, 2007 at 7:05 AM
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:)
I think I like being on my own... but not alone/lonely.. hmm..
posted by
opheliablue
on October 8, 2007 at 7:01 AM
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Oops.. sorry for the error..it's 'hate' ... not 'hare'
posted by
richinstore
on October 8, 2007 at 6:22 AM
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Ophelia
i hare being alone.
posted by
richinstore
on October 8, 2007 at 6:21 AM
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