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opheliablue, didn't get "speechless" bit? thanks for remarks, Mark
posted by
maxcohen
on October 8, 2007 at 8:43 AM
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That was very moving... very good.. bit *speechless* here...
(and hey, just incase you don't see the comment further down, well done at we-love-poems!!)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 8, 2007 at 5:39 AM
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Re: Powerful, shocking, but well captured - sorry to hear of such a thing.
thanyou for comments
posted by
maxcohen
on October 7, 2007 at 8:20 PM
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Re: Max---what a terrible time it was for you! Only a few short months ago--
thanks for comments.
My father died 18 YEARS ago, the piece itself I wrote about 9 years ago, so it's a long time ago. All deaths of someone close are painful and shocking, I just happened to be there when he had his final heart attack.
posted by
maxcohen
on October 7, 2007 at 8:19 PM
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Powerful, shocking, but well captured - sorry to hear of such a thing.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 7, 2007 at 3:31 PM
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Max---what a terrible time it was for you! Only a few short months ago--
it is so GOOD-that you are able to 'write out'-just a fraction of the painfull emotions you still bare! God bless you-keep writing! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 7, 2007 at 12:57 PM
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Re: Max
thankyou. yes it was traumatic
posted by
maxcohen
on October 7, 2007 at 8:56 AM
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Max
Wow - now there's a powerful and painful memory. You delivered a rich, emotional punch.
posted by
Troosha
on October 7, 2007 at 8:37 AM
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