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Thank you. I've only written traditional-style fiction--short stories and novels in third-person--so this style of writing is a major experiment for me. I still don't quite have a handle on it, but I'm hoping I'll get the hang of it with practice.Anyway, thanks again. 
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Phred
on October 10, 2007 at 12:09 PM
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you got a good story going on here. You do a good job of establishing the "rules" of your story, describing the roots of the existance of anthros. Its a bit tricky to do that without relying on the "just because" explaination. All that really needs to be done is a bit of cleaning up. with a little more description, you could really stretch the story out more. it just seams a little compact.
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draco101
on October 9, 2007 at 4:37 AM
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