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Re: Congratulations
Thank you! :)

posted by opheliablue on October 7, 2007 at 4:02 AM | link to this | reply

Congratulations
You should be so proud! 

posted by Corbin_Dallas on October 6, 2007 at 7:04 AM | link to this | reply

Re:
Perfect! Thanks for posting that :)

posted by opheliablue on October 5, 2007 at 3:04 PM | link to this | reply

you give me fever

by peggy lee

never know how much i love you
never know how much i care
when you put your arms around me
i give you fever that's so hard to bare

you give me fever
when you kiss me
fever when you hold me tight
Fever
in the morning
Fever all through the night

sun lights up the day time
moon lights up the night
i light up when you call my name
and you know i'm gonna treat you right

you give me fever
when you kiss me
fever when you hold me tight
Fever
In the morning
Fever all through the night

everybody’s got the fever
that is somethin you all know
Fever isn’t such a new thing
Fever start long ago

romeo love juliet
juliet she felt the same
when he put his arms around her
he said julie baby your my flame

now give me fever
when were kissin
fever with that flame in you
Fever
i'm a fire
Fever yeah i burn for you

captain smith and pocahontas
had a very mad affair
when her daddy tried to kill him
when said daddy oh don't you dare

he gives me fever
with his kisses
fever when he holds me tight
Fever
i'm his missus
daddy won't you treat him right

now you listened to my story
here's the point that i have made
chicks were born to give you fever
be it fair and have a sense of game

they give you fever
when you kiss them
Fever if you really learned
Fever
till you sizzlen
but what a lovely way to burn

but what a lovely way to burn
but what a lovely way to burn
but what a lovely way to burn

posted by magic_moon on October 5, 2007 at 10:31 AM | link to this | reply

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Thank you so much Moon! I think it actually helped that I had a fever when I wrote that! But I hope that doesn't mean I need to have a fever to write poems! Although... I've got a fever again now so maybe I'll write another one tonight ;)

Sorry...rambling... fever... oh and you can call me Ophelia :)


posted by opheliablue on October 5, 2007 at 9:53 AM | link to this | reply

Re: I shall check later . Thanks for sharing !
You're welcome!

posted by opheliablue on October 5, 2007 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Re: Brilliant opheliblue--congratulations! It must be a wonderfull feeling
aww thanks so much Chris! It is a wonderful feeling :)

posted by opheliablue on October 5, 2007 at 9:49 AM | link to this | reply

Brilliant opheliblue--congratulations! It must be a wonderfull feeling for
you!! I know how good it feels when publishers accept a piece of work-in ordinary book print-it must be even more so-on computer!! Well done-I'm thrilled for you! Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 5, 2007 at 8:49 AM | link to this | reply

I shall check later . Thanks for sharing !

posted by afzal50 on October 4, 2007 at 9:16 PM | link to this | reply

Ophelia, or should I call you Blue?, so many emotions, intense emotions, consuming emotions - the elation of the published work - the abject, existential hopelessness of the subject poem - the truth hidden in the woman behind both - Ophelia, or should I call you Blue?, so many, intense emotions. Moon  (and, and more than btw, Congratulations!)

posted by magic_moon on October 4, 2007 at 7:36 PM | link to this | reply

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Thank you 7stars, that's lovely :)

posted by opheliablue on October 4, 2007 at 7:22 PM | link to this | reply

posted by star4sky5 on October 4, 2007 at 7:21 PM | link to this | reply