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J-L

Wow........beautfiul expression! Such a difficult situation at such a young age!

posted by OneBetty on October 4, 2007 at 9:38 AM | link to this | reply

...you have evoked in me feelings so deep they are beyond my ability to express in mere words....Moon

posted by magic_moon on October 3, 2007 at 9:41 PM | link to this | reply

Troosha

I don't know.. it's something I often wonder about... I was about 17 and started my first serious relationship - he'd just broken up with someone. A few weeks later she told him she was pregnant (by him), would be keeping the baby and she would never let him see her. We were all at the same college... if looks could have killed, I'd be dead now... his ex-girlfriend left college eventually to study at home until she had the baby. I think it pretty much killed him inside to know that he had a daughter that he never saw. And I saw her this one time on the bus.. it felt so strange. I haven't been in touch with him for over 10 years now so I don't know what happened... I know his ex was quite unstable.. I think there was talk about the little girl being taken into care. I would like to know. She'd be about 20 now..

posted by opheliablue on October 3, 2007 at 2:46 PM | link to this | reply

Ophelia

What an emotional piece! I gather from your comment to Offy that these emotions are from the past but the child... what became of her?

posted by Troosha on October 3, 2007 at 2:25 PM | link to this | reply

Offy

Thank you :) Yeah.. it was a sad time...

posted by opheliablue on October 3, 2007 at 1:48 PM | link to this | reply

Kinda of sad....very good writing though!

posted by Offy on October 3, 2007 at 1:22 PM | link to this | reply

Re: opheliablue--Wonderfull! I feel a little of your pain over the birth of

Thank you Chris :)

posted by opheliablue on October 3, 2007 at 1:20 PM | link to this | reply

opheliablue--Wonderfull! I feel a little of your pain over the birth of the

babe! God bless-Chris.

posted by Scramble on October 3, 2007 at 1:07 PM | link to this | reply

Antonionioni

Thank you!

posted by opheliablue on October 3, 2007 at 11:54 AM | link to this | reply

afzal

Thank you