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Lovely. The reference to the drums will always call to me. AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on October 9, 2007 at 5:16 AM
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CP
I am really very much impressed...
posted by
Nautikos
on October 8, 2007 at 6:44 PM
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Wow
This is really great. The use of the repetition is fantastic, in some cases a lot of repetition comes across as overdone, but you used it perfectly here.
posted by
NightMajik
on October 8, 2007 at 12:02 PM
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Hey, that's good, cpklapper
Very different from what I've been reading. Takes me back to stuff like,
By the shores of Gitche Gumee, By the shining Big-Sea-Water, Stood the wigwam of Nokomis...
posted by
TAPS.
on October 7, 2007 at 5:12 PM
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it drifts gently and beautifully from far, in the night
posted by
nemonemo
on October 6, 2007 at 6:44 AM
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Wonderful word choices and rhythm. AmMused
posted by
AmMused
on October 6, 2007 at 5:10 AM
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cp
everything is a sleep in the still of the night.
posted by
richinstore
on October 3, 2007 at 10:33 PM
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carl
very beautifully and softly written
posted by
drohan254
on October 3, 2007 at 12:11 AM
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Interesting title, Interesting piece and well written/expressed.
posted by
SpencerStreetStation
on October 2, 2007 at 10:09 PM
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WEll -expressed !
posted by
afzal50
on October 2, 2007 at 9:44 PM
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CPK, yes please breathe life into those thoughts. this is beautiful
posted by
Kabu
on October 2, 2007 at 9:03 PM
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