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Re: CHRIS
eyeshaveears---thank you so much for your kind words-I'm very pleased that you find joy and comfort in them! Bye my friend-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 12:46 PM
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CHRIS
Always a joy and comfort. Blessings
Kind Regards
posted by
UncharteredSoul
on October 3, 2007 at 10:55 AM
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Re: Hello Dark Moon--Very many thanks for your wonderfull words!
I really do appreciate that!!I did some perusing-(what a lovely word)-on here in addition I had a great deal of support and guidance from blacksnow! He was my 'private tutor' from a distance!Isn't that just truly magical! Wonderfull teacher! I am happy to combine bits of everybody's guidance.Haiku was and still is-quite new to me and I enjoy writing this way!(Not ALL the time 'tho.) I am so pleased that you like those you have read and thank you again! I just love the masterly way that Troosha has with words but I have not got that in me and I don't think it can be 'learned'-I think it is-who she is!God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 8:07 AM
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Re: My attempt
Ha Ha--That's splendid Troosha! Thanks for such a 'creative' alternative! Lovely.Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 7:58 AM
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Re: Unexpected twists and turns - this has been a great exercise, Chris.
Hello Tony! Many thanks to you! Yes-it has been a Good exercise for me!Chris.
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Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 7:56 AM
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Re: Wonderful!
opheliablue---thank you very much--thought you might!!Ha Ha.Chris.
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Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 7:55 AM
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Re: wooo! great work!
Thank you so much FineYoungSinger! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on October 3, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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I don't know Troosha's Haiku background but, hers would be like comparing a PhD's to mine. I took a five minute crash course in Haiku a few months ago by perusing Haiku sites on the internet. 
So, I don't know anything but, I know what I like. I like yours!! These are VERY good. Moon
posted by
magic_moon
on October 2, 2007 at 5:43 PM
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My attempt
swirling sweet movements
clouds acquiesce to the sun
artistry in skies
posted by
Troosha
on October 2, 2007 at 3:15 PM
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Unexpected twists and turns - this has been a great exercise, Chris.
posted by
Antonionioni
on October 2, 2007 at 2:25 PM
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Wonderful!
Loved the 'petticoats' bit! :)
posted by
opheliablue
on October 2, 2007 at 2:14 PM
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wooo! great work!
posted by
FineYoungSinger
on October 2, 2007 at 1:15 PM
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Re: Scramble
Troosha--thank you very much-for all your comments! You say the formula in a different way to that which I have been shown-or perhaps-I have taken it on board-in a different manner! I like your description very much and have made a note of it-so I can recall! If I remember correctly-you were going to do some Haiku here? I'm so pleased you popped in-for you have shed a light-from a different angle--Bless you! Thanks again-Chris.
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Scramble
on October 2, 2007 at 12:57 PM
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Scramble
Although I'm not expert, the 3rd one was haiku par excellence. It offered a glimpse of nature and an action - the formula I have been taught (make the reader see something, then nudge the reader into feeling something).
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Troosha
on October 2, 2007 at 9:34 AM
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