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Hi opheliablue
I'm so glad I was able to make it sound like that..in the beginning I wasn't intending for it to be so rhythmic but as soon as I'd written 'every last one' a few times I knew I had to make it that way! Glad you enjoyed the poem.
Peace, regards, t/c and God bless!
posted by
lil_miss_emprezz
on October 2, 2007 at 11:02 PM
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Brilliant - I love the rhythm it has.. and I really like the repetition of
'every last one.'
posted by
opheliablue
on October 2, 2007 at 2:29 PM
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Re: Highly poignant and resolute !
Hey afzal,
Such high praise! Hehe +blush+ Thanks heaps and glad you liked it!
Peace, regards, t/c and GOd blesS
posted by
lil_miss_emprezz
on October 1, 2007 at 8:21 AM
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Thanks for the approval Dave!
Peace, regards, t/c and GOd blesS
posted by
lil_miss_emprezz
on October 1, 2007 at 8:20 AM
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Highly poignant and resolute !
posted by
afzal50
on October 1, 2007 at 7:54 AM
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posted by
_dave_says_ack_
on October 1, 2007 at 7:50 AM
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