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in my mind
this is very moving, sad.... makes me want to apologize for the world sucking so bad!!

posted by hollister_von on September 26, 2007 at 7:15 PM | link to this | reply

I like this piece.
really vividly described.  I can hear the shelling as I read.  Nice work!

posted by FineYoungSinger on September 26, 2007 at 4:27 AM | link to this | reply