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Re: Re: opheliablue-thank you very much! I'm sorry too-because I can't tell
Thank you :)
posted by
opheliablue
on September 29, 2007 at 4:43 AM
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Re: opheliablue-thank you very much! I'm sorry too-because I can't tell you
what the middle three lines are called-and I think of myself as a poet!!! All I know is-that the middle line 'continues' the theme of the first line and then the third line-is the 'twist'.I think I have it written down somewhere-I will try to find it later!God bless-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:42 PM
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Re: I've missed these Chris........
Hello mariaki---lovely to hear from you! Thank you-so much! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:38 PM
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Re: blacksnow-my dear friend---thank you so much-for the beautiful poem
and All that it says! shalommyfriendfromchris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:37 PM
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Re: Lady Symphony--thank you so much!Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:33 PM
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Re: OTA--many thanks indeed! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:32 PM
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That was beautiful - I really love the middle three lines (sorry, I'm not too sure what to call them... if they're the senru bit... and I call myself a poet!)
posted by
opheliablue
on September 25, 2007 at 8:17 AM
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I've missed these Chris........
excellent trio, thanks
posted by
mariaki
on September 25, 2007 at 5:41 AM
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POEM: Pearl and Praise
Murmuring brook
forested nook
dancing sunlight on faces of color
Little girl's life
godly strife, victim or wife?
serving apart; contrite as ever
Darkening forest
revealing truth
sunlight plays hide and streak
Girl astride stream
deconstructs past theme
reconcile american family
American dreams
Indian streams
second chances, dark dances, fused futures
Golden-haired girl
stares at Black world
food-basket and braids of Pocahontas
My dark daughters
my bright doctors
children teach us humanity again
(c)blacksnowdeonils09252007
posted by
ILLUMINATI8
on September 25, 2007 at 5:15 AM
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posted by
_Symphony_
on September 25, 2007 at 3:46 AM
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Scramble, I like these
~Peace, OTA
posted by
Blue_feathers
on September 25, 2007 at 3:14 AM
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Re: Chris
Soul Builder--you are soooo right! There's so much He misses! Thank you-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 2:02 AM
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Re: Dark Moon--thank you! We all have the 'child' in us and 'kick' a ball!
Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 2:00 AM
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Re: Chris, all 3 are great..the 1st one and the 3rd are my favs...what an image
Hi Rumored--many thanks indeed!The clouds were realy being blown around-their was only one answere for me at that moment!Pleased you like! Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 25, 2007 at 1:59 AM
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Chris
Soccer! Well I guess he really has a time-out. If not, he would be taking care o' business here!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 24, 2007 at 8:10 PM
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...and what an image of His 'time out'. Moon 
posted by
magic_moon
on September 24, 2007 at 7:23 PM
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Chris, all 3 are great..the 1st one and the 3rd are my favs...what an image
of God playing football..
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.....
posted by
Rumor
on September 24, 2007 at 6:44 PM
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Re: Hi Chris - these are great. The words one I particularly like!
Many thanks Antonionioni----(ha Ha)--thanks Tony-that's easier! I'm pleased you like-and I believe that's my favourite too! It happens so often-then I loose track?Bye for now-Chris.
posted by
Scramble
on September 24, 2007 at 1:38 PM
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Hi Chris - these are great. The words one I particularly like!
posted by
Antonionioni
on September 24, 2007 at 11:20 AM
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