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Powerful work, Opheliablue
Suggests loss to me; perhaps of passion (the fire descriptions) or youth or both. The alley setting lends a mystery that invites another read - a great poem!
posted by
Katray2
on October 3, 2007 at 4:34 AM
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oh realy sad..well written ophelia
posted by
drohan254
on October 3, 2007 at 12:31 AM
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Re: Hope u feel so much better
Thank you so much
posted by
opheliablue
on September 23, 2007 at 1:23 AM
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Re: ophelia....
Thank you! can't take any antibiotics for this, just fluids!
posted by
opheliablue
on September 23, 2007 at 1:22 AM
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ophelia....
TC and take those damn anti-biotics!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 22, 2007 at 8:42 PM
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Hope u feel so much better
posted by
star4sky5
on September 22, 2007 at 7:39 PM
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