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posted by
teddypoet_TheGoodByeFade
on September 19, 2007 at 1:52 AM
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Aloha....
Yeah! And the other is more satisfying than what you lost! I love the way you do this!
posted by
Soul_Builder101
on September 17, 2007 at 7:18 PM
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well done / spinner
posted by
spinner
on September 17, 2007 at 12:20 PM
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aloha
The "arms folded" was a dead give away that you were prepared to let go. Wonderful piece!
posted by
Troosha
on September 17, 2007 at 10:15 AM
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I like this poem very much !
posted by
afzal50
on September 17, 2007 at 9:41 AM
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Very good - that's how it often is - good layout too.
posted by
Antonionioni
on September 17, 2007 at 9:33 AM
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