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Dark_Moon, thhank you for your lovely comment, and more for your lovely post in response. Your words are absolutely gorgeous. And yes, that's the way of it, isn't it, that reading someone else's work can remind us of things in our own lives, even if we know the connection isn't direct. Thanks so much for sharing. Just.. lovely. *_*

posted by NightMajik on September 18, 2007 at 7:05 PM | link to this | reply

Re: Lovely NightMagic.
Thanks much, Chris

posted by NightMajik on September 18, 2007 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: always true.....

posted by NightMajik on September 18, 2007 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: nightmajik
richinstore, thank youuu

posted by NightMajik on September 18, 2007 at 7:04 PM | link to this | reply

Re: So profound , passionate , and true !
afazl50, thank you very much, as always

posted by NightMajik on September 18, 2007 at 7:03 PM | link to this | reply

Majik, this is so very, very good - so poignant. Forgive me, although you are writing about something completely different, it reminds me of several things I have written. I've already posted the one below one other time today - in Bhaskar's blog. And now - because of the evocativeness of your poetry, I'm inclined to post it again. I think I need to be stopped. "Stop me before I post again." Moon

pieces

 

there are no pieces left to give

all pieces given long ago

clamoring

for more of me

bits and pieces

it’s funny really

or

sad

all is all that’s left

all is all i have

all is all i want to give

i want to give it all

but they want

pieces

 

august 31st ‘06

 

posted by magic_moon on September 17, 2007 at 8:45 PM | link to this | reply

Lovely NightMagic.

posted by Scramble on September 17, 2007 at 2:05 AM | link to this | reply

always true.....

posted by star4sky5 on September 16, 2007 at 9:18 PM | link to this | reply

nightmajik
lovely.

posted by richinstore on September 16, 2007 at 8:59 PM | link to this | reply

So profound , passionate , and true !

posted by afzal50 on September 16, 2007 at 8:29 PM | link to this | reply