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pERhaps ThE ranDom cApitalizaTion iS meaNt tO inflICt paIn
oN tHe reaDEr. buT reaLly! we diDN'T dO it!
hoNEst.
Carl Peter
posted by
cpklapper
on September 16, 2007 at 6:38 PM
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The usual depth of honesty and variety of imagery - well done P!!
posted by
Antonionioni
on September 16, 2007 at 8:42 AM
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Thorn long and thin,
this was very very VERY penetrating, deep into parts of the thought process , past and future pain and the unending anxiousness that hoping dreaming so much so to be almost tasting the flavor of security that one can long for in a relationship , tho' the words allude to knowing it is never gonna' be.....You have looked in all the cracks and crevices
posted by
twomany
on September 16, 2007 at 4:26 AM
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